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Equilibrium Fan Fiction by Coolhand
This Lonely Tumult
(part 1)



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Part One. The Redemption.

 

 

He strode through the guts of the building, descending through rotten and decaying halls until he reached a simple steel cage, built crudely out of bars welded with more determination than skill. Inside, sat a group of six people. Two women, four men, not speaking, just tense. They turned to look at him, and he saw their eyes go wide, saw the fear grow within. They got to their feet, defiant. They saw a Cleric. They saw the iron fist of Father, the blazing white TetraGram-Cross muzzle flash of an SP-10. They saw death.

"You’ll have to kill us." said one man. He said it in a matter-of-fact tone that might have been Prozium-induced if it wasn’t for the look in his eyes. "We won’t let you take us back to the mockery you call the Palace of Justice."

The man was tall, his hair blond, his eyes narrow but intense. Partridge knew without being told. It was Jurgen.

"I’m not here to take you back." he said.

"Then what are you here for?"

Partridge found the lock on the cage and located its weak point.

"I’m here to set you free."

And he took the Jo from his coat, snapped it open and swung series of ringing blows onto the weak point, shattering the lock like porcelain. The door swung open with a creak.

He saw the astonished look on the faces of the people within. All except Jurgen. He was watching with interest.

"And your motivation, Cleric?" asked Jurgen.

"He’s one of us." said a voice from the corridors. Mary strode into the room, walked up to the cage. "He’s off the dose."

Jurgen looked at her, then back at him. Partridge could feel that gaze assessing him, coming to conclusions.

"You trust him?"

"Yes." she replied. "I do."

"Then in the absence of a polygraph test and the time for full explanations, your trust will have to do." Jurgen said, and strode out of the cage.


Outside, the sky had darkened with gathering clouds and rain was starting to spit down with growing confidence. Partridge led the group down the stairs and across the courtyard. His face was still, eyes focused on the ground in front. He had twenty new faces to haunt his dreams. Mary walked alongside him on his right, Jurgen on his left.

"Will you stay with us?" asked Mary.

Partridge shook his head.

" I can't." he replied "I'm a Grammaton Cleric. If they know I've gone over to the resistance, they'll tear Libria apart looking for me. I have to report back. Make then believe I am still taking my interval."

Jurgen nodded, his intense eyes boring into Partridge's soul.

"I agree. Right now you need to do everything possible to convince the TetraGrammaton that nothing has changed. Everything depends upon it "

He gripped Partridge shoulder.

"Partridge, you are potentially the greatest asset the resistance has ever known. An ally in the core of the beast. We've never had anything that came even close to this. This might tip the balance; finally begin what we have dreamed of seeing. The end of Father’s reign. The end of Prozium. The Resistance already owes you a great debt, Cleric. One day, the freed citizens of Libria will owe you a great debt as well."

Jurgen released his shoulder and said;

"But first we must deal with Largo. We can‘t let him survive, knowing what he knows about-."

The blast made them all duck, cover their ears, hit the floor All except Partridge, who simply turned and looked at the disintegrating building behind him.

"I think that problem just solved itself." Partridge said as the walls crashed down, a vast dust cloud rising to the sky.

Jurgen nodded, getting back to his feet and dusting off his clothes.

"Do nothing to contact us." He said. "The risk to us would be too great. We'll contact you when the time is right. Good luck Cleric. And stay safe. The people of Libria need you, even if they don’t know it yet."

Partridge watched Jurgen and his Lieutenants walk into the Nethers, then he turned to find Mary, stood close.

"You're scared, aren’t you." she said softly.

"I don't know how to walk this path." he replied. "I feel as though I've discovered the worlds greatest gift, but now I have to hide it from everyone."

"Not everyone." she replied. "Not from me."

"But I've killed so many innocent people."

"No you haven’t." she said shaking her head. "Another man did, a man who died in the Nethers when his Prozium failed. Errol Partridge isn't that man anymore."

She took something from her pocket and handed it to him. It was a book, the paper old, the hardback cover scoured and pitted.

"For you." she said. "I found it in the Hedonists supply room on my way in. It was the first book I ever read. It's a good place to start your journey."

He reached out a hand and took it, looked back up at her.

"And don't worry." she said. "You'll find your path. We always do."

"Will I see you again?" he asked.

"I hope so." she smiled, then stepped close, leaned in and kissed him on the cheek, a warm, soft pressure that wrote itself into Partridge's soul and became as much a part of him as flesh and bone.

"Take care Errol." she said, stepping away. He watched her go, watched her catch up to Jurgen and the others. Saw her look back once, just before she disappeared into the Nether. Saw her smile. His cheek still tingled from the kiss.

It's dizzying highs...

He looked down at the book in his hands.

Charles Dickens: A Christmas Carol.

The newborn Partridge tucked the book into his coat, took a deep breath of fresh, rain-tinted air. Looked up at the sky, felt the rain drumming softly on his face. He spread his arms and closed his eyes; just feeling the raindrops tap on his palms, on his skin, in his hair, imagining that the rain could maybe wash away all the blood that stained his soul. And when he felt ready, when he felt it was time, he opened his eyes, lowered his arms and set off towards the gates of Libria. The Cleric who'd left through them two days ago was dead, and the Cleric who was returning had never been to Libria before.

He was curious to know what it felt like.

Part Two. The Absolution. -











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